 Soluna Diaflore 2008-03-10 . chapter 2Yeah, I used to pretend that too -.-` but come on... CLOUDS ARE COL! Maybe one day in the future they will become cars that run on air! Maybe not... but someone said they're going to create a car that runs on rubbish! Now that's an easy way to stop landfill!
I saw you in a dream last night, and you and I were playing tennis (Doubles match) against Marui and Jackal. We won by one point (Match point) and we nearly LOST! Dang you stupid bell pole thingy and Rope Walking ALONG THE NET MARUI!
Sorry, I get really crazy sometimes. I have to go back to the first chapter to see how you're supposed to pronounce it lol.
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 notazombie 2008-03-09 . chapter 2Even with that pronunciation guide from chapter 1, I still cannot read that title, lol. Mental block, maybe. And ooh! There's faeries! I do like that she turns to someone else for advice.
I'm a bit iffy about this: "She had a restless sleep; thoughts of marriage and the Heir's Test were stopping her from reaching dreamhood." What is "dreamhood"? Is that another word for her dreams? I think I'm just tired. Keep up the good work!
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 notazombie 2008-03-09 . chapter 1That name... is a real mouthful. Seriously. If my parents named me that, I think I'd kill myself. Interesting premise--she has to pass a test to be queen? One question: why is she so violent about getting married? To me it just seems sudden, even if she is very expressive... And if she does this sort of thing normally (outbursts) why is everyone shocked silent? Ah, well, you've still gotten me hooked :D
-Naz, with the March Review Marathon (check out the link in my profile if you're curious) |
 Soluna Diaflore 2008-01-20 . chapter 1Daijobou, I'm reviewing! Awesome story! I wish I had come up with this idea -.-`
I can't really get a good plot for it. I create on chapter, then I have to delete it because I can't get the right plot for it! It really sucks when I come across that problem.
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