Haha. I read that line about an impregnated forehead with the same reaction.

This had a good pace, especially because all your characters are likeable. You do a good job at painting their quirks, which I love.

Another great story. :)

I did notice, "putting and arm". This should probably be "an"... but that was really it. Out of your entire marathon, I found a single mistake.

I am going to add this to my C2.

R.

Where is the rest? What? Come on!

So, I get the feeling that is family is like, really creepy. I'm talking, Addam's Family creepy or something. I have no idea what's going on with them, but um, the word creepy comes to mind. I like creepy things by the way. And I think I have said the word creepy plenty of times. Creepy.

So what's up with dad's obsession with Abby? And why was she kissing her brother? Is that normal? I don't kiss my brother... but oddly, if my brother were a character in your story, he would be Muriel. "The power of Jesus!" Hallelujah!

So I hope that you will continue this story, especially now that I am here to cheer you on! Whoo! Go Della!

I luff ju.

Woo, that was a good one. I'm still recovering from my insane bouts of laughter...

Alright, I'm good now. This family is amazing. B.D. is definitely my favorite so far, but all of them are awesome, what with their dysfunctionallness and all. If I had a mustache drawn on my face I'd probably react in much the same way, so I connect well with her.

I have the vague suspicion that Abbey isn't really Foster's daughter, but Asher's girlfriend. Maybe, maybe not. And that SOMEONE in this screwed up family killed the grandma. Again, I might be wrong. I'm sitting here trying to guess what the hell is going on, so great job on that. I love it when I don't have the answers to my questions cause suspense makes me super happy. Kudos on that.

So great job on the new story (although I'm still eagerly, very EAGERLY awaiting the update of Sharpen Your Tongue). Hooking first chapter, and of course you're writing is always superb so I can't really compliment that anymore than I already have. Woot!

FANTASTIC. I love your humor, and well, I'm not sure if I'm the only one who found myself laughing reading this, but it's pretty funny. You used the word "impregnate" in the same sentence as eyebrows...come on thats freaking awesome.

okay, i'm hooked. i've got to know what on earth is going on here.

ILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU~!

Hahaha, this is AWESOME so far. I liked the pacing, not too fast, not too slow. You introduced each character flawlessly.

Though, one thing? "Pock-marked." not 'Pot-marked' You know, like, chicken pox? Or smallpox? A pox! A pox!

JESUS STAYS ON AUTO GLASS AFTER EXHALATION DUE TO HIS GROOVINESS.

Yeah, I'm done. That was a bit fragmented.

lol! I love this. You're a great writer.

I like. What an absolutely adorable dysfunctional family^^.