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aprettywar
2008-07-07
ch 1,
abuseMath and I don't get along very well (haha, which is why I'm an english major and took college algebra twice), but this is fantastic! The rhythm is what really captured me, as well as the overall math metaphor: it just works! Keep up the great work; I really like your style :)
it's june
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseOh, it's a math metaphor...gotta love those. It's more mature than what you'd usually write, which somehow takes some getting used to, but it is a good poem.
Yellow Duvet
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseOoh, mysterious. I LOVE IT.
kelsi bones
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuseO, this is scary; I like it! I feel like it's a bit more intense than what you usually write, but it works well for you =]

"Girl plus boy equals messy endings"

LOVE it.

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