I enjoy the intellectual undertones of your work. And the imagery here is rather detailed as well. I caught something metaphorical in the lines "All those hours spent on perfecting the un-perfectible, / Researching the unknown and wooing the silent into chatter," and I wasn't sure if it was intended or not. But I believe you were alluding to the nature of a person's character perhaps? How becoming a person or developing onself is "wooing the silent into chatter?"

Either way, there are a nice couple of lines and overall you did well with this piece. Also, thank you for adding me onto your favorites list. That was very sweet of you and I appreciate it.