Damn James and his obliviousness!! *slaps him*

And Aiden needs to get over himself and just tell him! I like Alyssa, she's cool ^_^

This is much better! ^_^
There's a lot more description and the length of the chapter is good. I like the way you described the dream.

I love that Alyssa knows Aiden's feelings toward James. And it's even better that she's fine with it ^_^

I still wouldn't be able to add this one to my C2 because it's Fantasy, not young adult :/

But I'll keep reading!

DATZ SEW GUD N EMOCHUNULL I JUSS KRAI'D A LIL ON DA INSAID. SHAME ON ME WHY AM I SO STUPID?

more please