i love this!
cute oneshot.
i hope you draw/write more about these two characters.

wow, awesome! this was really sweet and it had a lot of heart behind it. I've never read anything presented this way (it doesnt seem like a script format in the official sense, but the same idea) but its a good job.

Simply beautiful.

A wonderful story. It's sweet but with a healthy dose of reality check in it. (Though I personally don't understand a word of French...)

I especially like the descriptions of the settings and camera shots - they're simple but clear and very visually effective. Can't wait to see the story in manga form. (:

I thought that it had good descriptions of some things I was not familiar with. Sometimes, I could not follow, mostly due to me forgetting what meant what. Besides that, it sounds like it would make a good manga (I can only imagine what they would look like) or a play (the directions mostly).

Now, if you have time, you should finish the other major story (besides glass) that I remember being on here and which I liked.

That was a very intense, sweet story. It dealt very well with the subject of bulimia and its devastating effects. I think that it will translate beautifully to manga form.

I have hardly any words to describe just how sweet and meaningful this was. Surpisingly, I have no complaint about the format, since the whole thing just seems to work better in panel format than in prose. I sincerely hope to see this in a manga someday. :) I cannot fathom you managed to make it sound so natural. Amboise's voice just sounded so real. I wuv him. X3 Very nice work!