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oh y'know.that girl 2008-06-28 ch 21,	abuseThis would really make me cry...I don't want Nicholas to die. You have really awesome writing skills. I like how fluid everything is. Your writing has a great sense of humor.
senjorita 2008-05-25 ch 21,	abuseI just thought I should say that I like your story, and I am hoping that you soon get five reviews so that you can update=)
Miss perky 2008-04-14 ch 21,	abuseHey, I really liked this chapter. I hope Nicholas dosen't die!That would be sad!I would wrote a longer review but I have homework so seeya!
Living Vampire 2008-04-03 ch 21,	abuseI like it and I'm w8ing for the next chapter, good luck on all ur stories :D
Silly-girl15 2008-03-31 ch 3,	abusei dont know if its my computer or what, but there is something wrong with chapter 1. :)
cyanidecandy 2008-03-12 ch 21,	abuseOH NO !! ! PLEASE DON"T KILL NICHOLAS !! please =( i love him and charlie together ! no !! i don't want him to die !
Mistress of Words 2008-03-09 ch 19,	abuseI really loved this this story. I especially love Chapters 8 and 18. When people speak of vampires that are portrayed as blood thirsty monsters. When I read Changed, I feel so connected to these characters because of they are so human. The things they do and say makes you want to be there with them to experience their journeys. I loved this and I can't wait to read more.
Roxanne Lilly Dubois 2008-03-02 ch 19,	abuseSo, I'm pretty much hooked on your story. =] I just read chapters 8-18 in one sitting. I cant wait for the rest! =]
Living Vampire 2008-03-01 ch 20,	abuseI like it, I hope that the ending is good, Please post the new chapter fast :D
menace in training 2008-02-28 ch 20,	abuseooh, love this story...I'm not normally into vampire stories - haven't been for a while (have you ever read the Darren O'Shan stories? well, they're more for younger people but anyway...) but I really enjoy this one, it's a great story, and I think you have been very imaginative with coming up with the plot along with the characters - I have a question, did you come up with al that vampire stuff by yourself? Because if you did, that's amazing. Update soon please!! oh, one more thing, I reckon Nicolas should have a nickname; although maybe that's just me, because I have a brother called Nicholas, and we all call him Nicky or Nick...but that's all!!
Avendetta 2008-02-27 ch 20,	abuseOh please dont leave me hanging like this to me this story is so wonderful every day i find myself hoping beyond hope that the newest chapter will be updated anwyas i hope you know that i will always love this story! well anyways toodle loo
Avendetta 2008-02-22 ch 18,	abuseI love this story it has a kind of TWILIGHT feel to it yet it is a truly unique story! I spent 2 hours mesmorized by this story I coudnt stop reading it! I hope that chapteer seventeen isnt the end, for it would be a shame that a story as cunningly written as this to end well ttyl.
confusionlove 2008-02-05 ch 12,	abuseOh snap! This is a good one. Really nice turnaround from what I was expecting w/what Nicholas answered... and the other vamp is back?? :o
confusionlove 2008-02-05 ch 11,	abuseCumulative review for previous chapters: GO! OK my ONLY comment about this chapter is that they are meeting Diana and Christopher at midnight? but they get ready to leave as soon as the sun sets. The last chapter: I really like Diana and idk about Christopher because he said like 10 words lol. But I think Charlie/Diana's conversation could use some more description. A lot of the time it's just "what she says." "what she answers." maybe some description of what they do while they talk. Just like I said for when she and Nicholas are playing 20 questions. Like for some reason I get the impression Charlie would fidget a lot during that lol. Anyway, this is nice, moving along now :)
confusionlove 2008-02-05 ch 9,	abuseThis is a cute chapter. I think you should probably add in some reactions and thoughts to the questions, so it doesn't seem so stilted since right now they are asking each other pretty personal things. Oh and I noticed sometimes you write "No" but there should be some punctuation there since it's a standalone sentence. And the last thing I noticed was that the sentence "His arm moving under the covers to get a better grip on my waist." is a fragment and personally I'd add like, "made my heart beat faster" or "pulled me closer to his body" etc. I shall read on :)

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