Reviews for The Town Where Toes Were Sucked

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A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-07-02 ch 2,	abuseOh, cool story! I adore it completely-- I can't WAIT for more! --a.k.a.
Seisaset 2008-06-18 ch 2,	abuseAmazing story! please update soon!
StarEyed14 2008-06-08 ch 2,	abuselol! loved it! -stareyed14
SugaPatch 2008-05-31 ch 2,	abuseEverytime I read a new story of yours, I am always impressed. Your stories are very captivating and have left me hanging. I can now officially say that you have become one of my favorite authors. I cant wait to read more of your work.
heavengurl899 2008-05-10 ch 2,	abuseits good so far the only thing that needs to be brought up is the fact that you make your characters unbelievable, the fact that you have both main characters undeniably pretty is cliche...take it down a few notches.
mythweav.r 2008-05-01 ch 5, anon.	abuseThe dream portion was really weird and doesn't bring credibility to the story. Perhaps should consider leaving it out. Having said so, you're a good writer and I look forward to reading more from you :)
Enaid 2008-04-24 ch 5,	abusei really like the see each other through their dreams bit. i think it could also help heal their relationship and lead to interesting things. hope others agree but either way it seems that this story is going to be amazing and i cant wait! update soon
skooshiegirl 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abusebookmark, but i liked this chapter so far... rebecca
A Reader Peep 2008-04-17 ch 5, anon.	abuseWel...I like the concept of not seeing each other's thoughts because it's a bit more realistic and the thought-seeing thing really threw me off. But then the other aspects of the story aren't that average, anyway, right? xD It's great, just probably not liable to happen in real life. knock on wood But in the end, either would work. =D
annad 2008-04-16 ch 5, anon.	abusehmm ok since u asked :P i think doing the switch will be hard.. especially if u dont intend to do it permanently.. (or do u?) im interested to see what havoc they would do while in each other's bodies :D but a straight forward real life story (without the switch) would be fine too :) its cliche but we love cliches!! :P it's easier too.. though possibly not as interesting as with a switch, but of course one can always make an okay plot into a great story :) goodlucck! enjoy ur vacation!
annad 2008-04-16 ch 4, anon.	abuseLOL you egg :D swarovski!! heheh represent! just forgot u've been updating this story :D yay im reading now. just had to leave the review for the swarovski reference :D i dont have an opinion on which summary was best.. although i knw i didnt like some. i think the current is ok though, for now anyways. yay see u on msn -anna mwah love
Cashaholic 2008-04-15 ch 5,	abuseWow, I've really enjoyed this story so far. It's been a really, really entertaining plot, and your writing skills are absolutely fab. I personally, really like the idea of them seeing each other's thoughts in their sleep, it gives a twist to the classic bet story. Anyway, I've really enjoyed this so far. So update soon! x. Cashaholic
haruku 2008-04-13 ch 5,	abuseUhm...I'll go with the little switching bodies thing... I don't really get the whole thing, so I'm guessing if you go that way, you'll elaborate on it? But the thing about the past is okay too(as long as it's not all let's-pity-the-fat-chick **). Yups. I'm liking the story so far, so good luck and don't stop writing(eh. so cliched) later, Haruku ;3
PinkEyedBoy 2008-04-10 ch 5,	abuseThe story is fabulous, and I think that the story, as a whole, would be better WITH the thoughts thing in it. After all, Mark needs a little help in understanding how Lindsay thinks, even if for a few seconds. Now, about your story. I really like that it's not too predictable. Can you believe I actually let out a sigh when I read the part about Mark pulling out the crystal flower? I love that Lindsay isn't thinking, "Oh, that boy broke my heart! Let him fall in love with me so I can break his--oh damn, nevermind I've realized I've fallen in love with him!" like so many protagonists seem to be thinking nowadays. One question though: Would Lindsay be falling head over heels in love with Mark in this story? I'm anticipating your next update! Ciao,
devil's-fav-angel 2008-04-07 ch 5,	abusejust centered around the bet would be fun

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