|Reviews for Hauntingly Broken|
| dreameratbang 8/31/08 . chapter 1
I loved it! It was so beautiful! And reminded me so much of evanescence. The way you've woven words together is really incredible! And the imagery was wonderful. I also loved the emotion behind it and you've managed to string it up with a rhyme scheme! loved it, write more! :)
| incandescent.smiles 2/25/08 . chapter 1
My dear darling Davida!
You already know what I think of this, but reading it again now... it seems like it's about other people besides the one you had mentioned to me, too. I love the frostbitten fingers thing! And the biting back whispers - such a cool phrase. I don't know why, but it is. Anyway.
YOU ARE FABULOUS AND I LOVE YOU. And I would never lie to you. (okay, there was that one time, with the shoes... *JUST KIDDING*). Seriously, though, hopefully this will kind of get you back into the "writing groove". Or something. Because I wanna read it because it's amazing.
| silentscreamer07 2/9/08 . chapter 1
.Bob. DAVIDA! You wrote something! AH! I mean..really! You actually wrote something! Did you know that? Did you? Because it made me so excited I almost peed myself! hahaha
This was just beautiful! I've really missed reading your writings. You have such a way to write amazing poems! Each word dripped with beauty and flow! You always remind me of evanescense in your writings. I think I can tell where some of your inspiration comes from! *winks* Because in your first stanza it immediately screamed Amy lee! and then in your last stanza?
"Bleeding and bruised by your own decadence" I dont know if you ment to or not..but Evanescense uses that word "decadence" in her last song on her new album. And I love that word! You used it great in your poem! When it comes to big words like that? I can never use them right and they always sound funny! *haha*
"Biting back whispers, I see it in your eyes/The malice dripping from each of your lies"
You can tell you really hate liars in this poem...which I think is another reason why i liked reading this one so much. Because i too am anti-liar..can't stand lies. I hate them. I don't like them in the least bit!
*sigh* but this was absolutely beautiful Davida! Keep writing! I hope you can continue to find your inspiration! haha i know! that thing called "life" its so time-consuming isn't it? *winks* lol But I hope to be reading more from you in the near future! And thanks for keeping me updated that you had posted! *boogies* love ya! Miss you bunches!
| Squidge VR6 1/23/08 . chapter 1
I haff missed ye and your writing!
And wow, what a comeback! It's... brilliant. So real... The emotions, everything. I can kinda relate to it, as well... so thats I suppose, a plus for me... Even though it's not nice! . Sorry I'm rambling I think!
Keep up the great writing! Hope to see more of your stuff up soon! :D
Wolfeh (11.34 in the am)
| Accalia Aeryn 1/21/08 . chapter 1
Hey, it's great to see something from you! Long time no write, huh? I need to start posting things again. Anyway, great poem! I love how it rhymes. I can't write a poem that rhymes for the world, but you make it look so easy! It flows really good. _ Quite my cup of tea. Keep up the good work and I hope to see something from you again soon!
| The Postscript 1/21/08 . chapter 1
The rhyming pattern really emphasizes the heaviness of the poem. There is this weighty, exaggerated feel that expands human emotion. Great job with imagery and in writing this in general. A warm welcome back, k.