Reviews for Your Sweet Symphony

Slightly Spazztic
2008-07-11
ch 1,

abuseSweet Symphony is amazing.
That's seriously all I can say.
Nothing bad, cheesy, or whatever about it.
It's like...perfect.
Nicely done.
I surely couldn't have dome that.
(:

Rose452
2008-01-21
ch 1,

abuseWow. Poetry is not something I usually go for, but I love this. It flows very, very well. I love how the first two lines rhyme (rhyming couplets? I think that's the term, it's been a long time since I sat in and English Lit lesson).

I love the repetativeness of the title, it gives me/the reader a sense of familiarity; it makes the transition to each stanza from the previous incredibly smooth.

I love the third line of each stanza, the way there are two words that rhyme-I just adore the whole structure of this poem. It is true poetry, unlike a lot of the writing people put out there that is more or less a lot of nothing, but they get away with it by claiming it is poetry.

Good job, I'll look forward to reading more.

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