I almost wish I hadn't read this story since it hasn't been updated since February. That usually means the author has either given up, is dead, or too busy and the story is on Hiatus. -angsty sigh- It would suck if the story was given up since its really good and funny. Update soon? please?

this is terribly cute. I want more. I'm terribly saddened that Grayson didn't get a great big ol' kiss for his birthday from Evan.
You've left us wanting so much more. Will there be a romantic linking between Grayson and Evan (Is Evan actually Grayson's stalker?) And what about Matthew, does he have feelings for Grayson too and what about grayson and just who he likes?
I can't wait for more.

hey. i really enjoyed your story and i'm keen to read more about the gray-hater grayson and the wonderfully mysterious evan. i like the stream of consciousness style, grayson;s thoughts are fun! so i hope you continue and post again soon. thank you

Okay, def some chemistry there. And Evan sounds hot. And Vana was strange. And Grayson was just as cool and awesomely immature yet mature in a strange kinda way as always. Props for the hyphenated-modifers (again) they still make me laugh. UPDATE? PWEZZ?!?

Chelsea :)

(PS. Once again, no negative feedback. YAY!)

I absolutely loved it. You had me hooked from the very beginning, and I just fell IN LOVE (but not that kinda love!) with Grayson Wolfe. I also love the way you used hyphenated-modifiers, it was so funny. The pace is really good too, slow, but fast enought to keep you wanting more. Is it just me or is there some chemistry with Evan and Grayson? Hahaha, gotta go read the second chappie. UPDATE. NOW.

Chelsea :)

(PS. I usually put my constructive critisicm here, or stuff that annoys me, but nothing earned negative attention in this story. GO YOU!)

Wow, what a great story to introduce me to original fiction. =]
I mostly haunt but saw the link on your profile and decided to give this a try.
It's bril.
Seriously, reading just those two chapters has given me an awesome feeling.I think your writing style is excellent, and Grayson never fails to make me laugh.
I wonder, if he likes pink and blue so much, what does he think of cotton candy?
Anyways, just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading the first two chapters. =D I'm bookmarking this and will be waiting for the next chapter whenever it's ready.

Happy writing!

poor Evan! His family is so weird.

NO! You must write more, I wont be happy ever again if you dont. Oh, the tragedy.

-_- a month in suspended torture w/o a update...
but nice chappie. grayson and evan are so cute together im gonna pass out from a sugar high

OK, I'm going to do this shooting from the hip, as I hit stuff.

You know, of course, that the beginning of this chapter went right over my head. The only series I know are World, and Television. Not Math seriesii.

Something is on Evan's mind... is it his raging gay boner for Grayson?

One thing I absolutely love about this story is the style of writing. Grayson is a bit scatterbrained, it seems, and his POV appears to reflect this. And it's win :D

The creepy-stalker woman who might actually be ... EVAN!? You can tell that this is what I'm really pushing you for, right? XD

Again with the easily distracted Grayson. Like..."he's staring at this. Oh yeah, this is..." I love it...it screams of stream-of-consciousness, only slightly more rational. Maybe like ADD.

Yeah, he's not staring cos he wants j00, Grey.

I'll confess, I don't much agree with his parent's logic. My brother has about a billion friends. I can stand maybe five of them.

Easily amused people are fun.

You mean "not homo, of course." right? (in the clothing store scene)

I would presume Grayson did just as much bother to the speed skaters...

Evan's mum's a bitch. Sorry, sorry, but really, she is.

Yay, Marching Band! And she's a flautist :D M...flautist...

Or, y'know, Vana assumes you already know you're best friend's gay... and are too neurotic to return his feelings.

Do I sense she will recur periodically throughout this story trying to push them together?

Oh, that girl knows JUST how to push all of Grayson's buttons. And what sexy buttons they are...and slightly kinky too. Yum.

Evan...please let her soon? Please? With a Grayson on top (of you)?

Kk I'm done now. I hope you are satisfied. This was long rofl. The chapter, not the review. The review is fail XD

Aww, Evan! I just want to hug him; he's just so damn cute.
Plus, when Vana was talking about him and Grayson I felt so bad for him (and yet happy as well.)
I hope we learn so more about Grayson's stalker in the next chapter! I would love to know who he/she was! I'm not sure if I should expect Evan as the stalker or not.

=D
Official link... Nice one.

I totally get the impression that Vana knows something about Evan's orientation that Grayson does not... =B Hehe.

The character Evan actually reminds me of my friend Qasim for some reason. (Aside from the fact that he is harboring feelings and is in the closet...) Just his general character and attitude towards the people around him, hah.

Good stuff.

This story is awsome so far! Grayson reminds me of me, the way he acts and stuff.

Oh, this is adorable!
I really like Grayson's extreme dislike for the color grey; it's quite amusing to read about. Also, Evan is great too. Such a neat guy!
Great characters all together and a nice plot.

I would love to see you continue this!

I'm definitely interested to see more, which is always a good thing. You've done a great job so far, so keep up the good work.