um yeah i totally beleived them, therefore making an excellent point. i loved the surprise ending and thought it was genius. well done!

freaky.

well. let's see. I think that it is really good, but where the heck is it going? anyways, if it's not a oneshot, UPDATE SOON

That was really good/sad. And yes, I did believe every word it. I guess that's the pro's of being a writing. Making people believe things that don't necessarily happen, or a con depends on how you look at it. Anyways nice piece!

-Raeven

hmm... it makes me think. i believed everything even after she had said that words could lie.

GAH! I told you earlier how much I loved this crazy little paradox piece of writing. It's still jsut as great as it was when I was reading it half-awake. Haha. So, his name stayed Brad. No Pablo in this story. Too bad... Haha. Dude, I just made a new blog thing for my stories. Go to my profile for the link. I STILL LOVE THIS PIECE! Natalie.

Duh i like it. Who wouldnt? ANYWAY IT IS VERY GOD. UPDATE SO SON.