ah, i had a good time reading this.
very raw, like you said, and very touching.
i wish you the best of luck.

aw :D

ohmymymy, gorgeous.
and my human emotions are taking over,
and i'm jealous.

beautiful.

verse i. was so very amazing to read,
i fell in love with your words.

this was wonderful. beyond wonderful. i'm so sorry if things aren't working out for you. i'll definitely check out the other acct. and know that you can always, always, always, message me if you need to talk.

--Faith

I can’t remember the last time I reviewed a story, but I figure that if anyone needs a review right now, its you. I’m not going to lie. When I read about your dog, I cried. It made me think of my old dog that I had to put down a couple years ago, even though it feels like yesterday. It made me think of my new dog that’s really not so new because I’ve had him for a year now but I love that dog more than anything. Now your probably wondering why I’m even telling you this and I probably wont send this but if I do, I just want you to know that things will get better. After reading the other parts of this story it sounds like you’ve found a really great guy and I hope things get better for you soon. Everything happens for a reason and what doesn’t kill you only makes you stronger blah blah blah, you’ve probably heard it all before. Now I’ll shut up but before I do, I just want to say that I’m going to miss updates and new additions to this story.

what i'd give..
this is sweet.

good piece, I really enjoyed it. Very well written. Keep it up!
Faith

aw. that made me smile really big. thank you.

aw, it's a real moment, totally something I could see happening. And that's so sweet, how cute! Good work :)
Faith

actually, this is exactly what I was expecting. I think it's great. What's great about it, is that it's real. It's genuine and the emotion. . .you could touch it if you wanted to, it's that true. And I love that in poetry. So, I give ya props, I liked it. And i'll read the short story too if ya don't mind. I like your writings :)
Faith

aw! that's so cute.
i haven't read anything of a boy writing his name on a girl's heart. i've only read stories the other way around. did he really do that?

aw what a frigging sweet chapter. haha. i loved it, it was so amazingly adorable. Keep it up, he sounds like a keeper btw :)
Faith

it's so... sweet.

I love this. If I had a guy write me this, I think I would just smile all the time ha. So, I love it. A word suggestion? Faith. Haha. It's one of my favorite words, which is why I made it my nickname. Keep up the good work, and update soon :)
Faith