Fantastic writing, great vocabulary, but I am noticing a few little problems with tense. Mainly going in and out of tense. But even this is a problem that I noticed maybe only twice, if even that. Also, there will hopefully be more exposition in following installments.

Anyway, very good. I’m not sure where you’re going with it but the prose is so well done that I would like to follow it wherever you plan to take it. Consider me a regular reader from this point forward.