not sure if i interpreted this the 'right' way- at first, it seems as if the girl is young and innocent but something's off about her and then from "Shiny robot chrome and the click of stilettos" i get the impression that she's older and well, "fake," like a robot.

beautiful imagery "The big, sticky lollipop melted in her mind/So the skies were thick rainbow swirls,"

wonderful job