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| Once Upon a Time is Forever 2008-07-20 ch 16,  | abuseWow. that was an amazing story. I can't wait for the sequel; pleez write soon! Thanx for a great read! |
| pyroangel28 2008-03-16 ch 13, anon. | abusei'm really really like this story even with the fast paced lol at least its not only 5 chapters or something...and i had to review just cause of the appearance of the favorite cousin...hehe he's pretty funny |
| Not Dead Fred 2008-01-30 ch 16, | abuseThis was really good. And I can't wait for the sequel. |
| alyssa 2008-01-30 ch 16, anon. | abuseAww now whyd you have to go and do that :( they better get back together soon!! I loved the story though and I am thrilled with how the last chapters went!! |
| Not Dead Fred 2008-01-30 ch 15, | abuseI really like this. Its well written with few grammatical errors. And I personally love the title. |
| Holiday in Spain 2008-01-29 ch 14, | abusethank god they got out of the house. and now the plot thickens... Oo... can't wait. |
| alyssa 2008-01-29 ch 14, anon. | abuseGosh I love this story. I'm so happy to hear there is going to be a sequal. I was really upset to know it was coming to a close. As long as it all ends happily. I can't wait. Great job with this one. :) |
| alyssa 2008-01-27 ch 13, anon. | abuseYay! Thayer is starting to open up! Now she just needs to break up with charlie so she can live happily ever after with thayer. Or a drama filled life that I can't wait to read. I still love this. Update soon please!! |
| Sanou Izumi 2008-01-27 ch 13, | abuseGreat storyline but I think that you rushed the story a bit to much. Either than that I loved it. -Izumi |
| alyssa 2008-01-27 ch 11, anon. | abuseOh wow. Now we just need her to break and with charlie, have theyer tell us what his deal is, let them get together and live happily ever after. For some reason with thayer involved I don't think its going to be that easy. Update son!! Really soon! Thanks. Great story! |
| Preethy 2008-01-26 ch 11, anon. | abuseI love it! im so excited for the next chapter now i cant stop saying oh my goodnes now i cant wait till you update again =) |
| phelps112 2008-01-25 ch 7, | abuseI don't know who I'm pulling for right now. So far Charlie seems really sweet and nice, and Thayer seems confused as to what he wants. And while sexual tension in real life is to be avoided at all cost, sexual tension in stories is awesome! |
| alyssa 2008-01-25 ch 7, anon. | abuseI'm pulling for thayer. How could I not be when its clear there is serious sexual tension between them. Charlie just seems like a really nice guy, a good friend. |
| Holiday in Spain 2008-01-24 ch 7, | abuseyay, still going for Thayer. I like the pace because I sense some serious back and forth-ness coming on where it is so much better that it gets to the point so the drama can ensue... if that made any sense at all [it's late, just had a mad jam cram time at the library XD] |
| Holiday in Spain 2008-01-24 ch 5, | abuseHmm... I'm rooting for Thayer if anything between Charlie and Natalie occur... I just like him better. |