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| Jazbkwm-unlucky-13 2008-08-05 ch 2,  | abuseCool fic please post more. XD |
| All The Rest 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abuseOh, yes, this is going to be a heck of a long day for our dear heroine. XD Hopefully they will learn to get along. I know how Ace feels. I have more than once spilled hot liquid on myself and others making me a hazard in early mornings. >.< Keep writing, it's getting interesting. ^-^ |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abusewelcomes! UPDATE SOON! |
| All The Rest 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThis leaves me in awe and waiting for the next chapter! Whee! A kiss stealer, guitar, violin and an angry girl; sounds like my kind of a story! *-* I hope you write more soon! Keep up the good work. :) |
| kioreo 2008-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's really good! I'll be looking forward for the next chapters!! ^^, |
| elisefey 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI really like the incorporation of the online game as a plot point. It's wonderfully modern and refreshingly different. |
| Coolio17 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseGAH WRITE MORE! |
| Carla 2008-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood story, he could of had a better name thou ^-^ but its good...keep writtin Carla likes |
| Rachie (the blonde one) =D ... 2008-01-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseLiam is the best kiss-stealer ever. The main character is stubborn for not thinking so.. =) I really like this ! It's so comical, and detailed, I want to draw it into a manga; especially the scenes with Liam. Good job writing ! There's a couple spots where the grammar is slightly off, and the ABC names are confusing, but a few editing tweaks can easily fix this. The rest of the story was so interesting that it shadows this, though. It's hardly noticeable. The only reason I even mentioned this is so this would be a "well-rounded critique." lol. ^_^ |
| Leila Drielett 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abusePing, I love this! The plot so far, how the meet and the background!! Ah I love it. Pleasee add more to this! I want to finish a story you wrote! -marleena |
| Codi 2008-01-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour story is so good. You write like a real professional you should have a deal or something. |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseupdate soon! |
| follow the night light 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuse:D i'm lovin the start...i love Guitar Hero it's so fun but it's so hard (for me...i think i just plain suck even though i actually have taken guitar lessons and play the bass o_0 btw its very different...) anywho i can't wait for more, fantasmic j0b! |
| MusicTiempoCyn 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseAhahahha. I love it. Violin/Guitar or Tennis/Soccer. Those are all the things I do. How freakin awesome is that?! Hehe. I had to get that out. I love the story by the way. Mui bien. Dozo yoroshiku. Good job. Etc. Whatever. |
| InkyHeart 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI really REALLY love this story update VERY soon! |