Hmm...this one has the carefully-picked-words quality to it too. Your writing style? I like it. "Sky's tears" is a bit jarring, especially at the very beginning. "One hand carefully searching for something never before found"...is this love/attraction? The phrase is somewhat bulky. Is there a way to re-word it? "...she's afraid her heart just may wash away with the rain." Nice image. I think you could cut the 'just' though.

Aw! That's cute ^_^