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| Stefanie Star 2008-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseAw... so sad :( Beautiful poem, though :) |
| FFLuvaNcook 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusecoolies, i don't usually read poetry but i thought it was really good. the underlining etc was effective and I love the way you ease the readers into the situation. gr8! |
| JJ March 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abusewow really awesome. i think the breaks and underlines etc make it so much more powerful, way to go! |
| crimsonxtearsxofxregret 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abusew00t. Another piece of goodness. I really liked how you wrote this, how there were some words stressed in certain ways and where you made the line breaks. Nice. Sucks that it's true though. OH and I really liked the ending, it's just like -BLAM!- good good. |
| PoorEnglishArtist 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abusewow this was good. i liked the way you stressed certain words and phrases like you did - when you read it it sounds so much better for it! sorry it was a true story! my sister had something like that happen! |
| J. M. Dusk 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseaww :( so sad! |