Very nice work here. Short, honest, and simple yet you did well using similes to as zest to the piece and bring out the nervous tone of the speaker. My favorite part was the lines "Like a new shoe / On a taunt foot," though I think you meant to say "taut." ;)

The only part I really found error with was the second to last line "This as old honey" which seemed out of place or needing clarification. Keep writing and challenging yourself!