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| perpetual questions 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, and it gets its point across, but kind of cliché I think. A little more imagery and new ideas could probably improve this. |
| adsaige 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abusethis minds me of a song by Ideal. sadly they are not a group anymore as far as i know. |
| Kadence 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I liked the flow. :) |