Reviews for The Heir of the Shifters

Katherine-the-greate
2008-01-23
ch 1,

abuseI liked this chapter once it got going, but I would reccomend rethinking the very beginning. you really JUMP into the story without giving any background on the characters or the setting, so the creation of a mental picture is a little less easily done.
Ps- wow, you put it all up in one day =]

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