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| angel953 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseokay this is an interesting vision it came across quite clearly..i could see everything you wrote its a bit morbid but i like it nice job |
| Alley Cat Scratchin' 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseYour poem certainly took me somewhere. What an interesting vision. I'm not sure if it was your words that created the imagery in my mind but it certainly helped. The way it was phrased and positioned was quite proper. The diction was so-so. I liked it. Good job. |