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| writingxonxwalls 2008-02-28 ch 1,  | abusereview game =) Wow. It's so... realistic? Is that the right word? Well- it's very real, and I've seen things like that happen right before my eyes. I love the whole wedge idea. Very good Umm- What I would change? Um maybe after the "Wedge" you could put a period? To emphasize? Awesome awesome awesome --WxOxW |
| Black and White Dreams 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuse:O :[ :"( thats sad. whats with you and depressing poetry these days? whatever happened to stuff like Painting People Yellow? Yellow is such a happy color! |