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| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseAw i love this poem! :) haha and i just sent you a message asking which poem you were talking about when you said you wrote one about Twilight. guess i should've looked more carefully... All the stanzas flow pretty well, but the last one i think flows a little awkwardly. i think you should be able to actually make it into three lines instead of four, Maybe: I love you forever and always. But twilight is the only safe time For us to be together Other than that, i really loved this its really pretty :) |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseLove the poem! I love Twilight. I'm so eager for the new one to come out soon! This summer! Keep writing XKristie MarieX |
| Black and White Dreams 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseaww thats sweet. i absoluely love edward with al my heart. twilight is my favorite book ever. |
| anon 2008-01-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI wish someone would have told me this when I first started using fictionpress: If you want to group your words together so there isn't a space between the lines, hit "shift" as you are hitting "enter" to break the lines. |