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| Napris 2008-01-24 ch 1,  | abuseresembling a quiet lullaby or a lovely folk-song preserved for a wonderful child named Anna. very gentle words,soft feelings:) |
| Matthew James Current 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! I wasn't expecting such elegant poetry in such a challenging style. This was actually quite lovely in its own rights. Rhymed couplets are a bugger to pull off while maintaining overall continuity and a natural feel. You did quite nicely with this I have to say. If you are serious about rhyming poems, then I'd highly reccommend longer, interwoven pieces with alternating rhymed and unrhmyed lines, or even entire stanzas rhyming alternating with unrhymed stanzas. My basic point being, if you are going to rhyme, (which you apparently have some apptitude with), then why not challenge yourself to rhyme in new ways or in different styles or formats? The best way to challenge yourself as a writer is to try different things. Maybe you could experiment with sonnets or meter as well? Find things that work for you and improve what abilities you do have as well as challenging yourself to develop new talents. Keep it up, and remember that it's quality and not quantity that matters. This goes for reviews, poems, and most things. ;) |