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Reviews For: Waiting in the Wings

Frozensummers
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abusethis is the most beautiful thing.

"oblivious to the fact/that as i whispered them to you,/i meant every word" -- my favorite lines.
caralita
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseoh my god, that is so beautiful. such an interesting concept. gorgeous.
kelsi bones
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abusei really like the lines "I just know right away,/ He's going to make it." it shows a hope that can sometimes be missed in a melancholy poem like this. it's really pretty the way you blended them together.

k.X
Yellow Duvet
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseWow ... so sweet and sad. Definetely sounds like someone's crushing on their best guy friend and he doesn't know. O: Definetely a fave.
painted.music
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abusekonnichi wa

I loved this piece. [+ favorites +] It sounds like a girl who's helping her best friend get a girl he likes to go out with her, but she's actually in love with him. Heartfelt and wonderful!

Zaijen
-Shan-
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