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| Frozensummers 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abusethis is the most beautiful thing. "oblivious to the fact/that as i whispered them to you,/i meant every word" -- my favorite lines. |
| caralita 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseoh my god, that is so beautiful. such an interesting concept. gorgeous. |
| kelsi bones 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abusei really like the lines "I just know right away,/ He's going to make it." it shows a hope that can sometimes be missed in a melancholy poem like this. it's really pretty the way you blended them together. k.X |
| Yellow Duvet 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseWow ... so sweet and sad. Definetely sounds like someone's crushing on their best guy friend and he doesn't know. O: Definetely a fave. |
| painted.music 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa I loved this piece. [+ favorites +] It sounds like a girl who's helping her best friend get a girl he likes to go out with her, but she's actually in love with him. Heartfelt and wonderful! Zaijen -Shan- |