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Reviews For: My Broken Music Box

rain-drop-princess
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseHey, after I got your review, I thought I'd check out some of your work. Nice poem...I really like the line:"The music is so lost and the rhythm is wrong". It reminds us that even though music can usually make things so right, that sometimes, like everything else in life, it doesn't fit our situation.
Chrisera Fitzman
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abusemy FAVORITE of yours
Crysta Mayville
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abusePretty good... I liked it.
Lurid Black
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseAmazing! Great rhymes, not simple, and a sweet topic chosen!
Incredable... keep writing!!
fictitious facades
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abusewow. nice rhyme. i like the whole image it conjures in my mind. great job.
XxXKristie marieXxX
2008-01-23
ch 1,
abuseLoved the last four lines. But the entire poem is great! Nice work!

Kristie Marie
simpleplan13
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abusethe idea of a broken music box and the importance of the song is wonderful... I love the rhyming.. its very subtle... great write
Every Breath is for HIM.
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good. I love it.
Twilight Starr
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseGood poem. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~
Katrina Zeffirelli
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseAAW! LOVE IT! =D *sniffle* Amazing. My favorite SO FAR!
--Ur cuz
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