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| rain-drop-princess 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseHey, after I got your review, I thought I'd check out some of your work. Nice poem...I really like the line:"The music is so lost and the rhythm is wrong". It reminds us that even though music can usually make things so right, that sometimes, like everything else in life, it doesn't fit our situation. |
| Chrisera Fitzman 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusemy FAVORITE of yours |
| Crysta Mayville 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abusePretty good... I liked it. |
| Lurid Black 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! Great rhymes, not simple, and a sweet topic chosen! Incredable... keep writing!! |
| fictitious facades 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abusewow. nice rhyme. i like the whole image it conjures in my mind. great job. |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseLoved the last four lines. But the entire poem is great! Nice work! Kristie Marie |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abusethe idea of a broken music box and the importance of the song is wonderful... I love the rhyming.. its very subtle... great write |
| Every Breath is for HIM. 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. I love it. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseAAW! LOVE IT! =D *sniffle* Amazing. My favorite SO FAR! --Ur cuz |