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| Drops of Jewpiter 2008-01-23 ch 1,  | abusethis is so cool. i love how it's written. my only suggestion is that you put the lines that don't start with "only you" in italics, because it's a tense change and a tiny bit confusing. |
| vampy08 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseaww its nicely put together..i really like it wished it was longer though could you read my story...just a clique..thanks in advance if you do |