Hm...I wonder what will happen next? I see a lot of trouble in the future, this story is getting interesting.

What? Aniro is black? This was a good chapter, I Satori seems like an interesting character.

Future Ideas
1. ero is gay (yeah I've noticed the whole "dosen't hit on girls thing too.)

5. ero sleeping with an old lady or man to get out of a fight (ha, that would be halarious.)

Past Ideas

6. ero not having a mask (in my opinion that would be kinda boring so I'm glad you kept the mask thing going on.)

Your characters are very interesting, and by interesting I mean just plain crazy. I don't really read gory stories like this but the humor makes up for it so...great job.

You know, your character Ero reminds me of my original character, Vince. He drinks, smokes, curses, and has and odd obsession with guns and shooting things with them...but not a drug addict. Well, if you count cigars as being a drung.

This is getting good! I can't wait until your next chapter!

This is a good story so far. I'm working on one too. Hope you do good with future whitings.

I'm not offended at the bitch and ho reference, as long as they actually are then I have no problem with it anyway. Lol, they are what they are, no sense in lying about it.

This was definitely an interesting piece. Good job!

A beautiful story! I'm definitely interested in this piece of work! I love how you've written and described everything. Unlike a lot of authors here, whos works seem like nothing but a glorified RP session, this has potential and I encourage you to write on!

Grand job!

Perhaps, if you have the time you'll check out some of my works.