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| Hip-Noise93 2008-06-11 ch 8,  | abuseWhat? Aniro is black? This was a good chapter, I Satori seems like an interesting character. |
| Hip-Noise93 2008-06-02 ch 7, | abuseFuture Ideas 1. ero is gay (yeah I've noticed the whole "dosen't hit on girls thing too.) 5. ero sleeping with an old lady or man to get out of a fight (ha, that would be halarious.) Past Ideas 6. ero not having a mask (in my opinion that would be kinda boring so I'm glad you kept the mask thing going on.) Your characters are very interesting, and by interesting I mean just plain crazy. I don't really read gory stories like this but the humor makes up for it so...great job. |
| Hip-Noise93 2008-05-11 ch 3, | abuseYou know, your character Ero reminds me of my original character, Vince. He drinks, smokes, curses, and has and odd obsession with guns and shooting things with them...but not a drug addict. Well, if you count cigars as being a drung. |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-04-27 ch 4, | abuseThis is getting good! I can't wait until your next chapter! |
| Dragonfire411 2008-04-26 ch 4, | abuseThis is a good story so far. I'm working on one too. Hope you do good with future whitings. |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-03-29 ch 3, | abuseI'm not offended at the bitch and ho reference, as long as they actually are then I have no problem with it anyway. Lol, they are what they are, no sense in lying about it. |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-02-03 ch 2, | abuseThis was definitely an interesting piece. Good job! |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseA beautiful story! I'm definitely interested in this piece of work! I love how you've written and described everything. Unlike a lot of authors here, whos works seem like nothing but a glorified RP session, this has potential and I encourage you to write on! Grand job! Perhaps, if you have the time you'll check out some of my works. |