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Reviews For: The Ronin Trinity: Cocaine, Vodka, and Sex
DCCherry 2008-07-24 . chapter 9
Hm...I wonder what will happen next? I see a lot of trouble in the future, this story is getting interesting.
DCCherry 2008-06-11 . chapter 8
What? Aniro is black? This was a good chapter, I Satori seems like an interesting character.
DCCherry 2008-06-02 . chapter 7
Future Ideas
1. ero is gay (yeah I've noticed the whole "dosen't hit on girls thing too.)

5. ero sleeping with an old lady or man to get out of a fight (ha, that would be halarious.)

Past Ideas

6. ero not having a mask (in my opinion that would be kinda boring so I'm glad you kept the mask thing going on.)

Your characters are very interesting, and by interesting I mean just plain crazy. I don't really read gory stories like this but the humor makes up for it so...great job.
DCCherry 2008-05-11 . chapter 3
You know, your character Ero reminds me of my original character, Vince. He drinks, smokes, curses, and has and odd obsession with guns and shooting things with them...but not a drug addict. Well, if you count cigars as being a drung.
Melissa Norvell 2008-04-27 . chapter 4
This is getting good! I can't wait until your next chapter!
SunKat411 2008-04-26 . chapter 4
This is a good story so far. I'm working on one too. Hope you do good with future whitings.
Melissa Norvell 2008-03-29 . chapter 3
I'm not offended at the bitch and ho reference, as long as they actually are then I have no problem with it anyway. Lol, they are what they are, no sense in lying about it.
Melissa Norvell 2008-02-03 . chapter 2
This was definitely an interesting piece. Good job!
Melissa Norvell 2008-01-22 . chapter 1
A beautiful story! I'm definitely interested in this piece of work! I love how you've written and described everything. Unlike a lot of authors here, whos works seem like nothing but a glorified RP session, this has potential and I encourage you to write on!

Grand job!

Perhaps, if you have the time you'll check out some of my works.
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