|Reviews for The Madman|
| drafts of ka 1/22/08 . chapter 1
Clever, and correct. ¡me gusta!
| Poet by the Water's Edge 1/22/08 . chapter 1
A strong theme. Your points are stated simply and well.
However, there was a lack of emotion and the poetry form itself needed to be tightened a bit.
Well done for tackling the theme of immortality.