I enjoyed reading this. I thought it was well-written and nicely developed. Thank you for sharing!

This was a great ride from start to finish. You were right, it was definitely more risque than the others, but that was definitely right up Raya's alley, wasn't it? Lol. I thought it was hot! You certainly write sex scenes very well.

I really liked Ryaden's appearances in the previous books, and so was looking forward to this one. Also, I really like a good espionage novel, the whole cloak-and-dagger bit thrills me. So, I really enjoyed this one, from Raya becoming the novice spygirl, to the whole Faceless Menace sub-plot. That was fantabulous. And how apt it is to have Laporia's jewel be an opal that looks at the present? Perfect for spying, I say. Perfect. I liked the 'unravelling', per se, of Ryaden's character. And I adore Lillya and Angus Wolfe.. how open they are! The Foxyn and Charlotte sub-plot was sweet-as, and the rush of excitement at the end, to the complete misunderstanding brought on by Jules (I knew it was him!) to the perfect ending at the Wilds, all were just fantastic. And of course, the last chapter, and well, most of the whole book, actually, in terms of the underlying plot, were perfect as a lead up to the last book.

OMG, what's up with this chapter? Why end it like this? CRAP. Good story, mind you, but the end of this chapter is pure CRAP.

Well, I have loved all of the stories in this series so far. I've spent hours reading all of them and am about to start the sixth one in a minute. One thing I've learned through all of them is that communication is key. Things would have been SO much easier if they were just outward with what they felt. Anyway, good job. And thank you for sharing these.

I loved the character of Ryaden, he's humble, mature and sweet yet very passionate. Who can't love a guy like that. Overall a brilliant story, with great characterisation. I really like how all the stories have a little extract at the beginning of the chapters. It provides more depth to your stories and makes the fictional world seem more real. good job =D

hiya

this is the best book yet, i love it. Great character development. Lots of drama and twist that make you want to keep on reading.

Well done.

Angel

really enjoying this, but, i must admit, half-way thru i started laughing so hard when she said 'sweet lasga' as i actually misread it for sweet lasagna at first, lol!

*sigh* Another perfect fic. Keep up the great writing. I think Foxyn and Charlotte's story should have lasted a bit longer- it seemed a bit rushed- but otherwise, genius job.

Cannot express how much i love your books. Ryaden is such a beautiful character, hes one of my favourite. Can't wait read the next one, i take it it's going to be about the man that Bryanna saved and i can't wait to learn more about him. i have this theory that hes the faceless menace...but thats probably just me getting carried away. That would be really cool though.

I just love your books I must say that I am now on Number 6 and cant wait to see what happens next!

i just love reading this story over and over and over again.=o) ryaden's just...so lovable.=o) i hope u get to post Makenna and Griff's story soon.=o)

5 down, 1 to go! Ah, if only finding your mate was truly as easy as kissing every bloke in sight... :)

Again, another great book. Your characters have depth and well, character, that you don't often see in stories (more's the pity!)

Don't give up on your publishing dreams! All it takes is some courage and research. Try looking up some companies. Alot of them have links or adresses on there sites where you can submit stuff. Just be careful. Alot of them don't accept emails. And don't worry if you get turned down. Every other does once in a while( or alot) Think of it this way. Harry potter by jk rowling,a known favorite among teens was almost but in the regect pile. Alot of favorites today are regected at first. Also can I suggest you send in one of your Prophecy of nature books. they've got me hooked!

FIR3 AND ICE

I have a quick question.

Are you taking any writing courses or thinking of being an author?

thanks for your time
FIR3 AND ICE

is the guy that bryanna took care of the faceless menace? and if not are u going to reveal him? and is arellia operating with noxyn?