Interesting. I don't know much about Superman or Batman (I always liked Spiderman best) but that was cute. I liked it. I was definitely confused a lot, but I think that had to do with me not reading Insanity for the past twenty chapters or so. Rawr. Anyways, it was well written. You should be proud. :P

Nice to see Zaitsu get some happy for himself. Sweet.

*wibble*

This had me wearing one of those inane little smiles that I always find myself wearing when I stumble on something absolutely freaking adorable. And this is very much worthy of said smile. Found myself continually making little cooing noises at the cute, the wibble, and laughing out loud at the funnier lines.

Mario, superheros... Oh. I couldn't stop giggling.

And the line that truly made me melt? "I wonder when my son will realize that his "Man of steel" is really just a man well armed with a first aid kit and a cellphone."

Have an internet, my friend. You really do deserve to be proud of this one.

Dear Wingless Raven.

I just read over your story and gladly I wish you to know that even though I was tried, I took the time to read it all only to find it intresting, fun and great to read.

Look forward to chapter 2.

I enjoyed reading this. It the sentences flowed well together and it kept my attention. I think it's pretty good.

I liked this story a lot. I liked the way the story went from him writing in first person to watching him in third person. The whole Super Mario part felt out of place... but other than that I thought it was very well written.

Zaitsu's not allowed to be Batman!

Anyway.
I really like it, very well done. This will go great with the roleplay. I like how it's put together and I really think we should just c/p this for the roleplay.
I've already thought of what 'Phoenix's' reaction will be after seeing it. XP Sad, huh? Man, we need lives...
Ya know what? No we don't, this /is/ our life. XD

I really think this would make a good Tv series, because it's so amazingly awesome and the world should love it.

The cranky old dog that lives under the couch... have you figured out what you're gonna do with him, yet?

Pretty good. ^^