That was soo cute in a sort of sexy erotic way

That was so good! I can't believe that it was a one shot. lol. I usually NEVER read one-shots.. but when I read the summary, it sounded good, and then when I started to read the actual story.. it turned out to be very gripping. I even went to your profile to see if you wrote an other stories.. but you didnt. SIGH*

Anyway,

Great Work!
-stareyed14

Great oneshot! Very well done!

~Lenny

this really was great... kudos!!

I think I melted during some point of this story, tell your friend that this story was nicely written

that was a good one shot..i loved it..can't wait for more your story..its very good..it would be nice if you turn it into a story..i still like it...bye..bye...

yes! who wouldn't want hot sex in college! details are well done. i like the eroticness of how he bit onto her neck and took her at the same time. i also very much like the title. unique. please continue writing.

a good one