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| DolphinWriter88 2008-05-01 ch 1,  | abuseI just need to say that I recently read a book called "Bloom" by Elizabeth Scott and...I think you got the idea for this story from that book. I'm not accusing you of taking someone else's idea but I am saying that this story is VERY similar to that book, which has already been published. Maybe I'm wrong here, but I think there are way too many similarities in this story for it to just be a coincidence. A girl has the perfect boyfriend but doesn't want/deserve him. Meets another guy. Other guy's working in the exact same construction job. Breaks up with perfect guy. Raised by a single parent. I'm not saying that this is for sure the same story, but if it is, I think you need to make some serious changes to this story so it doesn't become copywrite, because using someone else's idea is copywrite. Once again, I'm not trying to make it sound like I despise the story, but I think this is way too similar to "Bloom" to be just a coincidence. |
| writing.life.2.4 2008-04-24 ch 35, | abuseaw i hope he is lol. great chapter, i luv all the emotion in ossian's message. i had NO idea that she was gonna say THAT kind of stuf to ossian's voicemail, i thought she's be like begging for forgiveness, its surprised me. finally she got to learn about her family!! hooray!! great job! can't wait to read more!! |
| yayawhynot89 2008-04-23 ch 35, | abuseTrouble in Paradise :) I love Ossian lol more please |
| writing.life.2.4 2008-03-23 ch 34, | abusegreat chapter. i like that we get to know everyone a bit more and that she gives her self this whole morality speech thing, like she's her own worst enemy sumtimes. awesome job can't wait for more |
| ATangibleEssence 2008-03-12 ch 3, | abuseinsulin is injected into the subcutaneous fat on your body...in your buttocks, upper arm, thigh and stomach...with the insulin needles nowadays they really don't leave any marks...if they do it's a microscopic dots...the only time i actually feel like people think i'm a druggie is when i actually give the injection...people are either grossed out or totally enthralled and wanna see it again...we also haveta check our blood sugar multiple times a day to judge the balance between the sugar and the insulin in our bodies with what's called a glucose moniter... |
| writing.life.2.4 2008-03-09 ch 33, | abusei liked it!! she's finally in london!! and we got to hear from Ossian's point of view which was awesome and i luv the cousin thing... (i do luv asians..lol) i like how janet isn't all american indian just like Lillian isn't either. can't wait! great chapter!! |
| The Brilliance of the Mindl... 2008-03-09 ch 33, anon. | abuseHaha. I love her cousin! I love Ossian as well! I'm sure the next two weeks are going to be absolutely crazy for Lillian. Update soon. ^_^ Rebekah |
| yayawhynot89 2008-03-09 ch 33, | abuseyay! I'm excited :D more please :D |
| writing.life.2.4 2008-03-04 ch 32, | abuseNo! how dare she turn her fone off! lol. great scene with paul. there was a typo or two but no biggie. lol. great chapter and rlly quick update!! great job! |
| The Brilliance of the Mindl... 2008-03-03 ch 32, | abuseInteresting chapter again. I wonder what Ossian will say to Lillian about her 2-week vacation. I wonder what her grandmother will be like...Update soon. :) Rebekah |
| writing.life.2.4 2008-03-03 ch 31, | abuseomg!! paul?!?!?!? now i'm UBER curious! must find out! great chapter by the way! but i really wish Ossian was going w/ her! but NOW i rlly want to find out all about Paul! great job. |
| The Brilliance of the Mindl... 2008-03-03 ch 31, | abuseOmmegee! What is Paul doing there?! Yikes! So has Lillian told Ossian that she's leaving? Or is she not going to? Update soon! I'm dying to know what happens! ^_^ Rebekah |
| writing.life.2.4 2008-03-01 ch 30, | abuseyay! he's finally back! i luv that paul's a wimp. thats so perfect. lmao u'd think he'd be like "mister tough" but apparently not. great chapter! CANT WAIT to see what's coming up! |
| The Brilliance of the Mindl... 2008-03-01 ch 30, | abuseOh no! But she has to ask him! I knew Paul was a bugger! Anyway, update soon. Rebekah |
| writing.life.2.4 2008-02-28 ch 29, | abuseanother cliff hanger? haha lol. can't WAIT to see them meet. i'm so glad he came back! my guess is that paul or paul beat him up. great chapter! (and texting IS lovely. haha) |