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| Hoodwynk 2008-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseDeath shouldn't be refused, or feared. Nice haiku. |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abusePowerful words, makes you think! I love the second line! Well done ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| Julius Gillian 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was poem was near perfection, I can tell you this because I've never read anything with such symmetry to an umbilical cord compared with life and death. Those are intimate lines and I think this haiku is my favorite from you by far. I didn't find any favor in the last line though. |
| burning in effigy 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abusenever read anything about an umbilical cord before second line is very thought provoking but i'm not sure if i understand the last line (kind of cryptic) |