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| BrokenHeart4Eva 2008-03-22 ch 1,  | abusegood except one line that says "One kiss and his harms holding me" when i think you ment his arms |
| the.next.day.i.hate.them. 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThe repetition of the word "me" is extremely annoying and, honestly, I don't think there was a decent line in this poem. It's terribly written. |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI like this... I can relate to this a lot.. its very bittersweet and wonderfully written btw i wrote another piece.. im 90% sure it was you who asked when I was gonna post again |
| lookin4nemo 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abusei really like the last four lines! great job! |
| purple x pen 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseits scary how i can relate to this, nice work, oh and hehe im fairly new yes, but this is the first time i've heard of you too though, hehe, anyways, keep on writing =) |