Wow. That was an excellent display of writing, I must say (er... type). It had a very dramatic/poetic feel to it. Excellent writing. Okay, I said that already, but I had to say it again because it's so true.

I've already told you how much I loved this story, but I decided to tell you again. I loved how you portrayed your characters. I felt for each of them. And I loved how you incorporated Marine's ideas. You did such a great job with this. ^^

Wow. I can't think of anything to adequately express just how much I love this story. You are an incredible writer. It's short but so vivid and meaningful. ^_^

O.O


Deep. Whoa. (Speaking in monosyllables because she can't think of anything that expresses her "Oh-my-gosh-that-was-awesome-ness" feeling).



Egad! I kind of want to know more about Alicia, too. Does she have a backstory?

Love it! Finally, I was starting to lose my hope of seeing this story posted someday...^^

Great, great, great. So sad, and so meaningful... oh, and, I love how you handled part 4!

I bow to thee, oh great muse of hers... ;)