 reizuki 2009-11-24 . chapter 3awesome! |
 DOMOxKUN 2009-10-12 . chapter 3This story was absolutely sweet !
I loved the ending and I definitely wasn't expecting it.
And I LOVE how you tied the beginning and the end so perfectly.
I've read stories where they tried to do that but it just didn't come out well.
Hope you write stories like these soon ! |
 MagnificentMarvelousMe 2009-10-12 . chapter 3that was really really good! i liked it:)) |
 Electric Rose. 2009-07-04 . chapter 3AW !
CUTE ^_^
i adored this, it was definitely very cute. very well written :) |
 Brit Girl 101 2009-06-28 . chapter 3so cute and sweet - very original |
 Fadetonoir 2009-06-25 . chapter 3Hey, this was really cute. The idea was so sweet! It was written well too.
Looking froward to more cuteness!
Love
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(P.S There's a tiny error in the first chap - Its 'Board' Games. Just wanted you to know. :) |
 Nonica 2009-06-08 . chapter 3That was a cute little story. It makes me want to visit a bakery to see if that will happen to me. :)
I love that he had a big family, it reminds me of my huge family. |
 snoopy-x 2009-05-27 . chapter 3Aww how cute. |
 Liamtoha 2009-05-23 . chapter 3Cute. |
 Zippy 2009-05-14 . chapter 3 *Grins* I like it! Very awesomely cool!! =D =D =D =D |
 theaddictedfighter 2009-05-10 . chapter 3So darn adorkable. I'm so totally WISHING I had this kind of love life. Urgh, fictional characters always have it better than us.
Manda |
 P.F Ally 2009-05-04 . chapter 3Sequel? :) |
 Reticence 2009-04-28 . chapter 3Aww...cute idea. ;) |
 guitar.fingers 2009-04-21 . chapter 3thats realy cute =3 |
 1 800 vampire 2009-04-11 . chapter 3this was really cute. i like the ending a lot. so sweet |