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| Catastrophic Accident 2008-10-04 ch 3,  | abuseI loved this! Short, and utterly adorable. |
| cbprice25 2008-10-01 ch 3, | abuseVery cute. I want to read more! |
| notreal17 2008-09-30 ch 3, | abusethat was super cute... and super cute is better then really cute... just so you know...lol |
| deadlydisaster 2008-09-27 ch 3, | abuselove it. you should continue this its awesome :D |
| IHateMyLoveLife 2008-09-19 ch 3, | abuseNot all boys suck. It's true. But lately I'm thinking the boys I do know suck. Either them or my best friend. Good cute story. |
| Michiyo Uchiha 2008-09-05 ch 3, | abuseThe last part was so cute! |
| Azure Rose 2008-08-31 ch 3, | abuseAw, v. cute ;) |
| Vampire Girl13 2008-08-23 ch 3, | abuseThe dinner combined with the warmth and dimness of the room was making me sluggish. My eyelids felt heavy, so I lowered my head onto Travis’s shoulder and shut my eyes. - There were barely any cars on the road as we drove. I yawned and glanced down at the clock on the stereo. The green glowing numbers read, “2:47” I’m not sure how long I had been in that light, dreamless state on Travis’s shoulder, but someone had eventually turned on the lights. I had woken up and raised my head, squinting in the brightness. Travis had laughed at my clueless expression, until I murmured for him to “kindly shut it.” I suppose my hair was messed up from the nap, because Travis had reached up and casually brushed a few strands from my eyes. I felt my cheeks start to get hot, but Travis thought nothing of it. He had stood up from the couch and stretched his arms above his head for a second, luckily missing the pink color that had risen to my cheeks. That part honestly makes no sense. You don't turn on lights in a car, and there are no couches in cars. Also, " Someone turned on the lights"? There was another person in the car. Transition is confusing. |
| JamieBell 2008-08-21 ch 3, | abuseLoved it. Incredibly cute! |
| blackbubbleblue 2008-08-16 ch 3, | abuseThis was incredible. totally awesome I loved it. |
| sammygurl262316 2008-08-10 ch 3, | abuseAw... Travis is such a cutie pie :) |
| Green Eyed Angel 2008-08-05 ch 3, | abuseThat's so sweet! You're a genius. That idea of yours... Wonderful. Boys suck. haha. Great story. |
| Minxie 2008-08-04 ch 3, | abuseyou should really either continue this story or write a sequel... (which I don't know if you have written a sequel, that's what i'm going to goo see right now) I really liked this story. |
| BlackDraconian 2008-07-26 ch 3, | abuseamazingly sweet and cute! |
| xiao16 2008-07-23 ch 3, | abuseThat was adorable. Thank you so much for writing! |