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| xiao16 2008-07-23 ch 3,  | abuseThat was adorable. Thank you so much for writing! |
| Vinyl Cupcake 2008-07-07 ch 3, | abuseI love, love, loved this story! :DD The whole thing was very original, well-written, believable and very cute. I especially loved the ending. Fantastic work! |
| Erisah Mae 2008-06-22 ch 3, | abuseQuirky and sweet. I definitely enjoyed this,though I found it a little abrupt in places. Very nice ending though. Erisah |
| EnChAnTeD-KoReAn 2008-06-15 ch 3, | abusethat was a nice fluff. good job. thoroughly impressed. :) |
| Smiling Serenade 2008-06-04 ch 3, | abuseAw, very cute ending. Full of fluff. It was super fun to read. (: |
| ahahDUDE 2008-05-27 ch 3, | abuseThat was ridiculously cute :) |
| Sing With The Elevator Musi... 2008-05-27 ch 3, | abuseaw! he's such a cutie!! i loved this. once again you have a wonderful writing style, there's nothing for me to complain about. keep writing and never give up. find a spectacular english teacher who supports you and dont listen to anyone who tells you not to follow your dreams. haha it worked for me :) lol really spectacular, though. you have such a knack for writing. i love it! i would like it if you lengthened this into a whole story, he's such a cutie! i so want more of him. :) SWEM |
| IndigoAzucena 2008-05-25 ch 2, | abuseUGH. One of my favorite stories Yes, I know I'm re-reviewing, but I love this story. Can this happen in real life please? PLEASE? |
| DuchessYappingDog 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseI read all of your not-so-one-shot stories yesterday. Ugh. They all make me want a boyfriend. So badly. Hahahahahaha. |
| gulistanlik 2008-05-11 ch 3, | abuseI like how this fic ended similar to the way it started. What I'd like to know is, though, why did Travis just abruptly stop kissing her and left her like that? And I'm guessing right from the start he had his mind set on her. =D Congratulations on an excellent job! |
| LeyLey 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseThat's cute! I like it =) It's one of those pieces that makes you smile and go "Aw" |
| x3life 2008-05-03 ch 3, | abuseaw this was so cute!! =) |
| morbidpoet 2008-04-12 ch 3, | abuseAw...I am so ready to meet my soulmate via angry, feminist ice-cream cake. ^.^ |
| Hopelessly Clueless 2008-04-11 ch 3, | abuseAw, that was cute! I love the whole, 'not all boys suck. I promise' bit! Great story!! :D |
| fluteloop 2008-04-08 ch 3, | abuseOh my goodness, this was such a wonderful story! I really love your style! You manage to make to characters who don't even know each other very well fall in "love" (or just a crush, whatever way you want to take it) in just three chapters. And whats more, it's so natural and not rushed at all! I've read so many storys that just rush right into a relationship that doesn't make sense, but this one was just so...right. You know? Well, as always: WRITE ON! |