I loved it! It's so romantic!

Normally I'm not a fan of short stories, but this one is going directly to my favorites.

Really cute story. Worked really well as a short story. It made me a bit curious about Travis and Riley though, but the story wraps up well in three chapters. I really enjoyed reading it.

awesome!

This story was absolutely sweet !

I loved the ending and I definitely wasn't expecting it.

And I LOVE how you tied the beginning and the end so perfectly.

I've read stories where they tried to do that but it just didn't come out well.

Hope you write stories like these soon !

that was really really good! i liked it:))

AW !

CUTE _

i adored this, it was definitely very cute. very well written :)

so cute and sweet - very original

Hey, this was really cute. The idea was so sweet! It was written well too.

Looking froward to more cuteness!

Love

F

(P.S There's a tiny error in the first chap - Its 'Board' Games. Just wanted you to know. :)

That was a cute little story. It makes me want to visit a bakery to see if that will happen to me. :)

I love that he had a big family, it reminds me of my huge family.

Aww how cute.

Cute.

*Grins* I like it! Very awesomely cool! D D D D

So darn adorkable. I'm so totally WISHING I had this kind of love life. Urgh, fictional characters always have it better than us.

Manda

Sequel? :)

Aww...cute idea. ;)