Reviews for Breaking The Habit

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jessieleigh916 2008-07-13 ch 5,	abuseokay , im demanding that you wrightmore .. soon . because i wannakeep reading . the whole concept is awesome .. like you keep throwing things at me like BAM .. wtf , ahah its great ..
DeadlyWhisper 2008-04-01 ch 5,	abuseWoops, meant 2 review this ages ago. Aww you really feel for her in the last bit, because of her insecurity. Grr Mike needs 2 seriously get lost,can't believe he even thinks he can just waltz back into her life. As for Nathan...realy hope those 2 hook up soon! Would be tres cute. :)
ShesJustAPerson 2008-03-29 ch 5,	abusedun dun dun!? lol, very good. Seriously cant wait for the next chapter! Keep going missy!Don't leave meh hanging like most Authors do! XD ShesJustAPerson
Faith Adeline 2008-03-28 ch 5,	abusegood chapter. Can't believe Mike is back, ick. But, that should make for some good drama. The whole window thing is a bit too twilight-ish for me, but I still liked it. Keep it up and update soon :) Faith
Kohnitz 2008-03-21 ch 4,	abuseso... erm... still going to totally KILL YOU FOR MAKING ME THE BAD GUY. But I guess if you must... Nathan is still totally hot. I love him so. (: Erm.. update soon. Or those chopstick playing fingers will be someplace you don't want them to be. (:
DeadlyWhisper 2008-03-19 ch 4,	abuseOne word...Awesome! Keep it up.
Faith Adeline 2008-03-18 ch 4,	abusegood chapter, I liked it. It was a bit confusing, so work on the flow of things, but other than that, it was good. Faith
ShesJustAPerson 2008-03-18 ch 4,	abuseYour chapter cease to amaze young old me. I loved it an alway intriged by her little vision. I would ask and plead you to tell me but that would give the plot and shizz away and I dont think you intened to do that anytime soon. Anyways, glad you updated it, its mui bene and I simply cant wait for the next chapter to come out to see what will happen. ^_^ ShesJustAPerson
tigerchic11001 2008-03-10 ch 2,	abuseOk so this review is actually for the first chapter because I cant comment on one chapter twice O.o...weird lol Ok after you reworked it, I found that I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE
tigerchic11001 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseHmm. It sounds a LOT to me like the Twilight series. Its good to get ideas from books that you like (because aren't all ideas already used up? lol) but I would change things around to make it more your own. For example, Stella, sounds a lot like Bella. And the fact that she is now living with her Dad (although I like the touch with the dad's Girlfriend). Also the similarities between the school office... and then being carried to the nurse's office, and her being clumsy in gym... it just seems too much like Twilight to me. I really do like the story though and I realy want to read more! I hope you found the advice useful. (I have the same problems in my writing lol when i like a book too much ill end up writing a story almost identical to it XD)I really hope to hear more from you :)
ShesJustAPerson 2008-03-03 ch 3,	abuseHey! I like it, though it kinds reminds me of the Twiligh series. I dont know, I might be wrong though shrugs. I cant wait to read this story some more. Keep up the good work Chica-dee ^_- ShesJustAPerson
DeadlyWhisper 2008-03-02 ch 3,	abuseHmm...Merci seems strange. Maybe Nathan bit her...Haha either way keep it up.
Kohnitz 2008-03-01 ch 3,	abusegah, I still love it, dollface. :) I'm waiting to see what happens with the whole going-over-to-Merci's-house thing. Should be interesting. especially with Nathan there. And you better tell me who wrote the note. :) Much love, your sissy.
Faith Adeline 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseI would've liked to have seen that month, rather than just read about how it's a month later (if that makes sense). But this was still a good chapter. Keep it up, and remember to take your time with things. A good story doesn't need to be rushed :) Update soon! Faith
Faith Adeline 2008-02-10 ch 2,	abuseI love where this is going. Hilarious. Kinda reminds me of Twilight, only a little. In some parts it's better. (GASP) Keep it up and update soon!! Faith

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