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| BrokenHeart4Eva 2008-03-22 ch 1,  | abusethis is amazing, it almost made me cry both happy and sad tears at the same time |
| Yusuf 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really like how it transcends from one emotion to another. I could actually feel the emotions as I was reading it. I could feel the happiness half way through, and last few lines "I can finally say happily / It’s just another wonderful day without you" made me smile. Really nice and heart warming poem. ~Yusuf |
| Kissing Concrete 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseso sweet... :) gave me a happy feeling. |
| kloun doll 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI read the poem twice to understand, it's sad, well, it's a story about a man who loses his wife but doesn't give up 'cause of their daugther? |
| battleof1 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseawh how sweet! i love it, its amazingXD well done |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseSweet, its good, but a little simple, though it shows vast emotion, which is only what a poet may possess, keep writing. ~Lurid~ |
| heresyisforlosers 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. Amazing how babies can change your perspective on everything. If you like movies, I recommend "Waitress". s.t. |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI love how it starts out like resentful and angry and by the end is total sincere... that's the effect children can have.. the descriptions of the girl are also really great A few grammatical errors: Taken care of her.. takin' but id stick with taking because the other lines are ings Another day were I want to break down... where PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon.. there's a link in my profile |
| lookin4nemo 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abusethis is so sweet! I love it so much! |