Really like this, would love to see it continued! =)

This is cute and promising. :) I'm intrigued.

This is intereseting. ^^ I think you should continue it.

Awsome origional idea! It was cute, I liked the way that you did it in the octopuses point of view. I hope you continue on.

Cool! Awesome. I can so see Pisces Jangoral in this, but that's your choice of course (I just love the Jangorals).

:) CD

This is a cute idea. I like the bits of 'octopus culture' (color-changing, breeding season, etc.) and hey, I went to Wikipedia and learned some new stuff about cephalopod intelligence, so thanks for that. ;D

I'd read more.

--dreamshell--