 La. 2008-02-20 . chapter 1 Well that's upsetting. Dying for a single oil spill, when there will be many more? Not only that, but they die before we even get to know them!
By the way, I think it would be quite helpful if you created a list or a chart that showed all the characters and how they were related. There are so many; one can forget or become confused...
I'm not trying to attack your work by the way; I always love it. I would, however, like it if this piece was longer. It's such a serious subject, containing unknown characters, to be dealt with in so short a chapter. |