Reviews for The Unselfish Alchemists

A Great White Light 2008-02-22 ch 1,	abuseInteresting, but is there any deeper meaning? I can see why you got a publishing deal. You're a really good writer.
La. 2008-02-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell that's upsetting. Dying for a single oil spill, when there will be many more? Not only that, but they die before we even get to know them! By the way, I think it would be quite helpful if you created a list or a chart that showed all the characters and how they were related. There are so many; one can forget or become confused... I'm not trying to attack your work by the way; I always love it. I would, however, like it if this piece was longer. It's such a serious subject, containing unknown characters, to be dealt with in so short a chapter.
Casey Drake 2008-01-23 ch 1,	abuse...closes eyes Lovely. Gosh I love these stories. :) CD