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| jrsparkus 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseawesome! it's the best i've read that doesn't have a clear rhyme scheme, keep up the good work |
| Michael l'oeil fol 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseinteresting...flow is strange in places but i assume its meant to be a song? great little peice of personification...odd but i like it. as for my comas *shrug* no one teaches grammar anymore. i tend to err on the side of more rather than less. be well. Michael |
| The Cowardly Lion 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abusewow. I decided to read something of yours since you read something of mine and I read this. This is so morbid it's not funny. Like I'm actually afraid to know how you thought of this. It is still amazing though. I love it, in a weird way. |