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Reviews For: Bullets for Bella

jrsparkus
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuseawesome! it's the best i've read that doesn't have a clear rhyme scheme, keep up the good work
Michael l'oeil fol
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseinteresting...flow is strange in places but i assume its meant to be a song? great little peice of personification...odd but i like it. as for my comas *shrug* no one teaches grammar anymore. i tend to err on the side of more rather than less. be well.

Michael
The Cowardly Lion
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abusewow. I decided to read something of yours since you read something of mine and I read this.
This is so morbid it's not funny. Like I'm actually afraid to know how you thought of this.
It is still amazing though. I love it, in a weird way.
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