Oh, gosh. This was fantastic, but really sad. I'd say tragic but then I'd feel bad for rhyming it with fantastic. Really good Overall.

Well... >.< that was depressing, but very well written. Your dialouges are well done. I like it.

That was very sad, I really felt for Etuei.

I enjoyed reading it as well. It read like a myth, or an old story, and I liked the way it was quite faced paced like them, even though a lot of time is covered.

The image of the woman covering herself in clay was a good one as well. I really liked that.