Now this story was filled with raw emotions, and rewalistic events, i liked it.

it was good and it kept me interested but no offense, its really depressing and sad once you get to the end. most people like happy endings, including me

Holly got what she deserved

wow

Good story. Too bad all those kids died but other than that I liked it.

** they were ** insane! this was good.

only on chapter 4 but just wanted to say that its awesome

Wow I'm frustrated that I don't get to know what happens to EVEN!
UGH. But I seriously wasn't expecting all those people to die... i really like Carter.

kinda creepy and really depressing :(

What did she see?

Very, very well written story. Slightly morbid though...

Gup

I love it! The ideas are great, and the foreshadowing is really effective. You're such a great writer. While I was reading, I noticed something that may have been a mistake. Mrs.Jacobs asked if dr hen was Ashlyn's daughter. Did you mean doctor?

Please tell me there another story of this. You can't leave us hanging there. But i love it. It is awsome please keep writing.

Okay, so what the ** did she see? I still don't know what happened and what she saw!
~Amanda~

AH! *brain explodes* I am going to cry!I wish I'd found this story sooner so I could've encouraged you to keep it up, but now I think I was too late... *tear tear* oh well it rocked even w/o my enthusiasm, As for right now I'm off to look at the other like "Part two" type story!
Ciao
Innocence

Very good story (: are you planning on making a sequel to this story ? :D