You have a very strong sense of voice.

But i also feel that is being undermined by your repetition and rhetoric, which has a jarring effect.

And then, i realise, that, that IS the whole point of it. Your purpose.

And i like that. )

you are preching to the choir. I am with you on that point, we are all our own being and no one can ever change that. Thank you for putting that up. :)