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| Arlee Ross 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseoH I LOVE THIS!! lol..i like how you named her after a disney character, very original! |
| C. Welsford 2008-02-10 ch 2, | abuseYeah, okay, I didn't review when I should have (i.e. when I first read this) but I'm making up for lost time! I really like what you've done with the story so far, it's getting more interesting by the second. (: Great job, can't wait for more! In other words: UPDATE SOON! (and I'm going to throw in a thanks too xP) - C. |
| MistyBluePrincess 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abuseIt was pretty short but I'm loving the way you're continuing the story line. Keep it up girl! Can't wait for the next chapter! Nat. |
| Riley Hunter 2008-01-26 ch 2, | abuseHey. 'sokay that 'tis a short chappie. I needed something to watch during the Miss America Pageant anyways. GOOD JOB. and update when you can |
| MistyBluePrincess 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseGirl this story is so awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love the way you utilize descriptions and the 1st Person narrative. Very cool so far. Just make sure to double-check on the grammar- as any author knows- there are always a few mixing in. NR |
| Not Dead Fred 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseYou really only need one super popular person to think you are cool for the rest to be to afraid to question it so maybe is in the clear! THis is good. I like it. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseyou kept writing "hate" when you meant "have" other than that, minor spelling issues, and good story! |
| C. Welsford 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseInteresting! I like it, it's kind of a new twist on an old story. Update soon! |
| Riley Hunter 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseHEy. I like your story. FYI, you may want to get an editor or something cause you spell some things wrong. But that's nothing. Anyways. Update soon if you can |